09 March 2008 ~ View Comments

My Room: my refuge, my prison, my cage.

Today while doing some extensive cleaning in my room, a poem popped in my head. Initially i ignored it, but something kept nagging me inside my head to write it, so i did, not sure if it makes any sense, but at least i tried. Here, read:

My Room is my life, it is my soul, it is where all my secrets unfold.
It’s sometimes a mess, i must confess, i do my best to keep it spotless.
It’s where my valuables lay all day, i sometimes wonder if there is where they must say.

So much information it holds within, browse thourghly  and you’ll see within,
it’s really pathetic that i wrote this poem on a whim.

It’s a real god damn shame that i will have no choice but to leave it one day to a
world where i will have to face all night all day, graduating from a room to a mansion
will be my greatest expansion; with the world i will have great interaction. My room, my refuge, my prison, my cage.

By Gordon Swaby

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View Comments to “My Room: my refuge, my prison, my cage.”

  1. taylor2nd 9 March 2008 at 9:01 pm Permalink

    not bad. i love my room as well.. but leaving it for a bigger space aka the mansion.. i wont feel bad at all lol.

  2. Stunner 10 March 2008 at 10:38 pm Permalink

    Not bad star! I’ve never been poetic about my room before.

  3. Leon 11 March 2008 at 9:50 am Permalink

    My room’s cool too, but I wouldn’t write a poem about it.

  4. mad bull 15 March 2008 at 11:43 am Permalink

    Eventually women and children will invade your space and you room will never be yours again. Enjoy it while you can.

  5. Esteban Agosto Reid 16 March 2008 at 3:22 pm Permalink

    Hey Gordon,congratulations to Holmwood on their magnificent victory at Girl’s Champs.RESPECT!!


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